March 25, 2012
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You guys are marketing geniuses. **revised flyer based on everyones suggestions*
Alright, so here is the new version of the flyer I’ve created after receiving a good amount of feedback from everyone here!
I really appreciate the help, so keep it coming! I want to start putting this flyer up THIS week!!!
Thank you again! And please recommend this post again so I can get as much feedback as possible!!
Comments (15)
I know I didn’t contribute to the earlier post, but this does look a lot better! It draws me in, and somehow looks more “modern”.
@Jenny_Wren - is there anything that particularly bugs you about it?
It’s much better, that’s a flyer I’d take a second look at. I know you said it was for a local flyer so maybe offer a “hook” of some kind if they bring the flyer in? A percent off discount a free additional goody of some kind or something? Only, of course, if they show up with the flyer in hand. Good luck! I hope your business does really well. When you’re ready to go national let me know. I see three or four broken i-phones a week at the club, jocks and phones don’t mix. I could possibly send some business your way.
Yes — much better!
It looks great! – Oh and btw, if someone calls you late tonight and asks if your refrigerator is running, well it’s not me!!
This is much better – I would suggest using a less sleek and sexy picture for the “bland” ipod, maybe something like this. The one you used is photoshopped to look nicer than they look in reality, which is both inaccurate and counterproductive to your pitch.
I like this ad better than the first. I’m always dropping my phone, so that is what mine looks like. And yet, you refuse to use Greg, Rowley and Rodrick….
looks nice!
Isn’t it warranty?
@Kevin_is_a_pirate - thanks! (I can’t believe I didn’t pick up on that!)
@justfinethanku - eh, we all make typos that it takes someone else to notice. It’s a sweet looking ad though but what’s that plus sign under if it’s broke?
@tsh44 - I think that is a great idea, because epople like discounts and it makes people keep your flyer!
Much better!
I agree with @tsh44, offer a discount or something that gets people wanting to call up your number and send an email.
I bought an iphone 3G off ebay (before iphone 4 came out) that was not working for $110 (too much imo) anyway, found out the logic board was bad, got one for $125. Jailbroke and unlocked it, works fine now and was fun to fix, but kinda spendy for what it is. The jailbreak was ok, but only thing was had to use an ipad baseband to jailbreak, which of course means its not reversible. At least it’s not teathered
@Happily_Married_Guy - I’ve used the iPad baseband to unlock a few phones, it’s a tough call but you’ve gotta do what you’ve gotta do. I got out of the software side of things a long time ago though, it’s maddening to do customer service for geniuses who upgrade their unlocked iphones to the new version of iOS because iTunes told them to… blah